WOW...a marine engineer hunh...i know someone who is in pakistani navy as well but he is not an engineer he does something else.
wesay mujhay ajj kaal engineer larkoun say thori allergy hay.lol.dont mind but i definately cant swallow ur guys work timings...u guys work way too much..i guess.
Thank u for translating in english all the hard urdu words i still didnt quiet understood much of it but i got the point..i learned swiming before i start reading poetry..thats y im still floating on top havent drowned yet..im 20 years old but i started reading poerty when i was 7.lol.....i swear i didnt know what i was reading but those thick books in my hand made me look smarter..but mujhay shayri ka shouk kuch 16 ki umer say hay n then i stopped reading 3 years ago.
allama iqbal is no doubt the most intelligent poet he even quoted quran and hadees in his poetry but ahmed faraz is great he knows where and when to pin which problem.his theory for love is maybe different then many others..
mein chati houn kay app apnay har message mein koi acchi poetry likehin faiz ahmed faiz ki i wanna read some of it and next time itni deep batein mat kariyega i almost got dizzy reading what u wrote make it easier next time.lol.thx.
angel.

p.s.in ur message u used so many words which were some how related to sea...im sure u r in marines

huii hai shaam to aaNkhon mein bas gayaa phir tuu
kahaaN gayaa hai mere shahar ke musaafir tuu

bahut udaas hai ik shaKhs tere jaane se
jo ho sake to chalaa aa usii kii Khaatir tuu

merii misaal ki ik naKhl-e-Khushk-e-saharaa huuN
teraa Khayaal ki shaaKh-e-chaman kaa taair tuu

main jaanataa huuN ke duniyaa tujhe badal degii
main maanataa huuN ke aisaa nahiin bazaahir tuu

haNsii Khushii se bichhar jaa agar bichharnaa hai
ye har maqaam pe kyaa sochataa hai aaKhir tuu

'Faraz' tu nay use mushkilon mein Daal diyaa
zamaanaa saahib-e-zar aur sirf shaayar tuu

Great!.......angel aap male hain kay female?.....may to ab tak aap ko male samajhta raha hoon.....anyways.....achchaa zauq rakhtay hain aap........about faiz ahmed faiz......faiz gham-e-duniya aur gham-e-ishq may kiss tarah tafreeq kartay thay yeh aap nay shayad suna to ho laikin ghaur nahi kiya ho ga ......unkee famous nazam likhta ho Mujh say pehli see mohabbat meray mehboob na maang

May to samjha tha kay tu hai to darakhshaan hai hayaat

Tera gham hai to gham-e-dahar ka jhagra kiya hai

Teri soorat say hai aalam may baharon ko sabaat

Teri aankhon kay siwa duniya may rakha kiya hai

Tu jo mil jaay to taqdeer nigoon ho jaay

Yoon na tha , may nay faqat chaha tha yoon ho jaay

Aur bhi dukh hain zamanay may mohabbat kay siwa

Rahatain aur bhi hain wasl kee rahat kay siwaa

Unginat saddiyon kay tareek baheemana tilissam

Resham-o-Atlas-o-kamkhuwab may bunwaay hooay

Ja baja biktay hooay kooch-o-bazaar may jism

khaak may luthray hooay khoon may nehlaay hooay

jism niklay hooay amraaz kee tanooron say

peep behtee hoee galtay hooay nasooron say

lot jaati hai udhar ko bhi nazar kiya keejiay

Ab bhi dilkash hai tera husn magar kiyaa keejiay

Aur bhi dukh hain zamanay may mohabbat kay siwa

Rahatain aur bhi hain wasl kee rahat kay siwa

Mujh say pehlee see mohabbta meray mehboob na maang

[i]Socha Tha ky ab naa yaad karan gay uney magar

[i]kuch bhi naa raha yaad, wo jab yaad Aa gai.........

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[i]Tumharay Shaher main Aaia hain Musafir ki tarha

[i]Bas Eik baar Mulaqat ka Moka day day ........

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leprince im unfortunately a girl.....but that poetry....(mujh say pehli si mohabbat meray mehboob na mang) this poetry was sung by a singer too so i have heard it....it didnt sound so great when they sang it but the poetry itself is good. but Faraz is amazing i think...so what else u like except shayri..ur hobbies...
and dreamworld...i wonder for whom u wrote that shair....but keep up maybe oneday ull get good at it.lol.ur pickuplines will work someday.