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Kuch likhna chahta hun..!

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asimurooj
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2008-04-05 09:00:17
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Kuch likhna chahta hun
Sochti hun kia likhon.?

Unka aakar muskurana
Jo roth jaon tu manana
Jate jate phir rulana
Kia unka yeh Andaaz likhon?

kuch likhna chahti hun
sochti hun kia likhon?

Yadon ma unki Ashk bahana
Her shaam aik diya jalana
Soe umeed ko roz jagana
Kia unka yeh intizaar likhon?

Kuch likhna chahta hun
sochti hun kia likhon..?
Reviews (2)
nice
byorisha_nla, April 8, 2008
very nice poem ..keep it up...:)
Owner's reply

thx for liking my poem

Keep it up
by4everfriendz, April 6, 2008
Itna sub kuch likh ker bhee tum pooch rahi ho kia likhoon?

apnee tarap ka,uski jafa ka choro na qissa, kia likhoon?
Owner's reply

Thx alot

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