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na shikayaten na gilaa kare

Owner: mughals
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Votes: 3
Rating: 4.66
Created: 2008-05-08 08:30:35

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na shikayaten na gilaa karey
koi aisa shakhs hua karey

jo mere liye he saja karey
mujh he se baaten kia karey

kabhi roye jaye vo be panaah
kabhi be tahasha udaas ho

kabhi chupke chupke dabey qadam
mere peechey aakar hansaa karey

meri qurbaten meri chahten
koi yaad kare qadam qadam

main taveel safar main hun agar
meri vaapsi ki dua karey

Reviews (2)

very nice

byinsecurestar, May 9, 2008

a good comback after few days,nice poetry

wonderful

byam125_taurus, May 8, 2008

its really very very nice.

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