Apnakarachi Submissions
Dastaan-E-Gham
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- next big thing
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- Rating
- 4.49
- Created
- 2008-05-01 11:26:41
Jo Dil Per Daagh Hen Apney Chalo Tum Ko Dikhatey Hen,
Sunoo Neendein Nahi Aatin K Dil BeTaab Rehta He
Kabhi Titlii K Kachey Rang Kabhi Jugnoo Satatey Hen,
Kabhi Jab Shaam Hoti He, Andheron Se Khafa Ho Kay
Teri Yadoon K Mandir Mein Charaagh-E-Shab Jalaatey hen.
Reviews (2)
accha likha hai app ne apni gham ki dastann, aur accha likhne ki koshissh kerain.
byam125_taurus, May 2, 2008
sad hai magar achi hai.
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